This is the first rough cut for our AS Media project- The Pyre. So far we have included a range of shots so the camera work is well although the editing is done poorly which has caused shots to jump; this can be seen a lot 0:14-0:24. Other things that need to be improved are the lack of music and that there are no opening credits.
This is the first rough cut to our short film- The Pyre.
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